Friday, June 10, 2016

ANZAC writing

WALT-use words from our reading book to enhance our writing.

I learned ANZAC cove is not a part of New Zealand now i will shear 2 of my best sentences Today the 10th of  November 2016 me, Roley and my master Beatrice Christie  we will tell you the story of our life at war. But first I will tell you about me and my master I’m Roley the donkey and master Beatrice she is a human doctor we make a great team.

I achieved my goal because I used words from my reading book.

Next time I will make it sound more interesting. 


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